Hostage at the Womens’ Prison
Alright, ya’ll. Please give me some honest feedback and opinions about this. Im trying to critique ability to tell a story. Let me know if it’s too long, too wordy, hard to follow, boring, whatever. I have alot more but I want to be sure they’re worth reading before I submit them. Thanks!! Marcus sat on the cold floor in the corner of the female prison laundry room, staring up at his two shank-weilding captors. On the other side of the locked door, a riot was under way. The incarcerated female population had planned it for weeks in protest of living conditions, guard brutality and other demands. Other inmates had decided to use the riots as an excuse for other activities: among them, two gang wars, a grudge attack and a jailbreak. Marcus could hear …